How to Write Essay for 8 Bands with Example

1.       Structure of an essay

a.       How much an essay is organic ( 25% marks)

    2.       In every paragraph, every sentence should be properly organized.

    3.       Essay has three parts.

a.      INTRODUCTION

b.      BODY (2, 3, 4  paragraph)

c.       CONCLUSION

    4.       Never give more than 3 points in an easy (eg if you have 7 points) CHOOSE TOP THREE.

INTRODUCTION

Quality of the sentence or vocabulary can help you improve band score from 6 to 8 or more than 8.

    

    1.       INTRODUCTION 

a.   2-3 general background sentences (Gives orientation to the reader or create a mood of essay.

b.  Restate the topic (In your own words). It helps to convey clearly to the reader what the topic is.

c.   State clearly what you intent to discuss in the body of the paragraph. ( To tell the reader what he can anticipate to read in the forthcoming paragraph.

Example:

Topic - Some people like to do job in order to earn money, while other prefers to run their own business.

Background – People have been working since ages to earn hard earned money for their livelihood. By doing this,  they ensure a smooth life for their dependents and contributes towards the economy.

Restate the topic – Some people are in favor of jobs to make their living seamless, whereas others believe that living one’s own business is a better choice. Both these options have their own advantages and disadvantages which I would like to discuss in this essay.

BODY

POSITIVE POINTS

When you start a paragraph, embark with the theme sentence

Eg. There are some obvious advantages of doing a job.  

First of all, ..............(state your arguments here)

Secondly, …………………………………(state your arguments here)

Lastly, Last but not the least……….(state your arguments here)

NEGATIVE POINTS

However,

On the other side, there are also some serious disadvantages of doing a job. To begin with the most imperative thing in the own business is that a person doesn’t have to take orders from anyone he is his own boss, Moreover.....

On the other hand, The major/main benefit/the biggest in the own business is that a person doesn’t have to take orders from anyone he is his own boss, Morever…..

Secondly, ……………(state your arguments here)

Apart from this…..(3rd point)…………(state your arguments here)

CONCLUSION

To Conclude, I would like to support my argument….

To Sum up the discussion…..

In a Nutshell…….

To wind up the discussion…..

After weighing the pros and cons of the both options, I have reached the conclusion that….

I pen down saying that …….

Example :

Describe the sports facilities provided by the government in your country?

(Background)

Sport is an imperative part of my country. India has been dominating the world sports in Cricket, Hockey and Olympics since long.

(Restate the Topic)

Today, we will discuss the initiatives taken by the government to improve the facilities for the in India.

(Intent of Topic)

I will put forward my arguments for the areas where govt. has taken the steps and where they lacked.

(Positive Point 1)

Government has created opportunities for younger talent in the country. They have opened new sports academies and providing the coaching for free to youngsters to hone their skills in their areas of interest.

(Positive Point 2)

In addition to that, they are also strongly focused on inspiring and encouraging the young girls from the conservative areas where there are not much guidance sources available. As of now, they are able to attract and produce the phenomenal female players in Olympics and Cricket.

(Positive Point 3)

Furthermore, they are also providing opportunities for younger players to play at district level and state level. If they perform well, they could get a call for national academy camp.

(Negative Point 1)

On the other hand, government has failed to offer enough support to games like volley ball, basket ball, kabaddi and hand ball.

(Negative Point 2)

Apart from this, government has also failed to take care of the veteran players as they could have been used better for planning and decisive actions in BCCI.

(Conclusion)

I pen down saying that government has taken admirable initiatives to surpass the level of sports in the country. They should also pay equal attention to the under rated games like volley ball, basket ball, kabaddi and hand ball.